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The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the
Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include
**a lil code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from DTI, and
can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us long-term!)
**a lil referral code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from
DTI, and can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us
long-term!)
## Why now?
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And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right
now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only
help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be
part of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope
we can tell you more about it soon!
help us fill gaps in the customization user experience, but can also be part
of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope we
can tell you more about it soon!
I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between
companies and their fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my
best to represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the
community, and keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI
independent, only do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a
critical eye as we go.
companies and fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my best to
represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the community, and
keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI independent, only
do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a critical eye as we
go.
So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months,
and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,