From 3bf07b02da6a5d5641816a90fee6b97060732faa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Emi Matchu Date: Tue, 12 Mar 2024 18:41:58 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] A few more NeoPass about page copy edits --- app/views/about/neopass.html.haml | 21 +++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/views/about/neopass.html.haml b/app/views/about/neopass.html.haml index ec4692fc..076378a3 100644 --- a/app/views/about/neopass.html.haml +++ b/app/views/about/neopass.html.haml @@ -35,8 +35,9 @@ The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include - **a lil code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from DTI, and - can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us long-term!) + **a lil referral code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from + DTI, and can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us + long-term!) ## Why now? @@ -47,16 +48,16 @@ And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only - help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be - part of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope - we can tell you more about it soon! + help us fill gaps in the customization user experience, but can also be part + of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope we + can tell you more about it soon! I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between - companies and their fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my - best to represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the - community, and keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI - independent, only do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a - critical eye as we go. + companies and fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my best to + represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the community, and + keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI independent, only + do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a critical eye as we + go. So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months, and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,