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@@ -35,8 +35,9 @@
 
 	The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the
 	Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include
-	**a lil code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from DTI, and
-	can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us long-term!)
+	**a lil referral code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from
+	DTI, and can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us
+	long-term!)
 
 	## Why now?
 
@@ -47,16 +48,16 @@
 
 	And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right
 	now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only
-	help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be
-	part of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope
-	we can tell you more about it soon!
+	help us fill gaps in the customization user experience, but can also be part
+	of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope we
+	can tell you more about it soon!
 
 	I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between
-	companies and their fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my
-	best to represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the
-	community, and keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI
-	independent, only do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a
-	critical eye as we go.
+	companies and fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my best to
+	represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the community, and
+	keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI independent, only
+	do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a critical eye as we
+	go.
 
 	So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months,
 	and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,