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The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the
Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include
**a lil code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from DTI, and **a lil referral code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from
can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us long-term!) DTI, and can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us
long-term!)
## Why now? ## Why now?
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And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right
now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only
help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be help us fill gaps in the customization user experience, but can also be part
part of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope we
we can tell you more about it soon! can tell you more about it soon!
I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between
companies and their fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my companies and fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my best to
best to represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the community, and
community, and keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI independent, only
independent, only do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a critical eye as we
critical eye as we go. go.
So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months, So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months,
and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts, and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,