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The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the
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The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the
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Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include
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Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include
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**a lil code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from DTI, and
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**a lil referral code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from
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can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us long-term!)
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DTI, and can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us
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long-term!)
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## Why now?
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## Why now?
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And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right
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And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right
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now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only
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now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only
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help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be
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help us fill gaps in the customization user experience, but can also be part
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part of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope
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of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope we
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we can tell you more about it soon!
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can tell you more about it soon!
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I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between
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I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between
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companies and their fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my
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companies and fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my best to
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best to represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the
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represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the community, and
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community, and keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI
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keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI independent, only
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independent, only do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a
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do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a critical eye as we
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critical eye as we go.
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go.
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So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months,
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So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months,
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and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,
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and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,
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