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Copy edits for Dyeworks in Item Getting Guide
I think the parens are silly now that this paragraph is just kinda all bonus clarification info anyway. And I wanted to explain the cost computation for the potions, and highlight the bundle thing!
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If you don't get the color you want, you can use another potion to try
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If you don't get the color you want, you can use another potion to try
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again. It's also common for users to exchange the variants they don't want
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again. It's also common for users to exchange the variants they don't want
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via "NC Trading". (Potions can be bought individually, or in bundles of 5
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via "NC Trading". Potions can be bought individually, or in bundles of 5
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or 10.)
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or 10.
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[dyeworks]: https://www.neopets.com/mall/dyeworks/
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[dyeworks]: https://www.neopets.com/mall/dyeworks/
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title: "At least #{pluralize @items_needed[:dyeworks].size, 'potion'}, " +
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title: "At least #{pluralize @items_needed[:dyeworks].size, 'potion'}, " +
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"average " +
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"average " +
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"#{dyeworks_average_num_potions_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]}, " +
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"#{dyeworks_average_num_potions_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]}, " +
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"could be more"
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"could be more. 125 NC per potion, but cheaper in bundles."
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}
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?? potions
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?? potions
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(~#{dyeworks_estimated_potions_cost_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]} NC)
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(~#{dyeworks_estimated_potions_cost_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]} NC)
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