From d5752eac2ad22582d143178e8bc2cd91f753e4b8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Matchu Date: Thu, 20 Jun 2024 14:40:09 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Copy edits for Dyeworks in Item Getting Guide I think the parens are silly now that this paragraph is just kinda all bonus clarification info anyway. And I wanted to explain the cost computation for the potions, and highlight the bundle thing! --- app/views/items/sources.html.haml | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/app/views/items/sources.html.haml b/app/views/items/sources.html.haml index 4ac4bde0..9765bd35 100644 --- a/app/views/items/sources.html.haml +++ b/app/views/items/sources.html.haml @@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ If you don't get the color you want, you can use another potion to try again. It's also common for users to exchange the variants they don't want - via "NC Trading". (Potions can be bought individually, or in bundles of 5 - or 10.) + via "NC Trading". Potions can be bought individually, or in bundles of 5 + or 10. [dyeworks]: https://www.neopets.com/mall/dyeworks/ @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ title: "At least #{pluralize @items_needed[:dyeworks].size, 'potion'}, " + "average " + "#{dyeworks_average_num_potions_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]}, " + - "could be more" + "could be more. 125 NC per potion, but cheaper in bundles." } ?? potions (~#{dyeworks_estimated_potions_cost_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]} NC)