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Over time, Neopets is planning to send more users our way, and we want them Over time, Neopets is planning to send more users our way, and we want them
to have a smooth experience when they get here! to have a smooth experience when they get here!
So, new users will be able to click "Login with NeoPass" and use their **So, new users will be able to click "Login with NeoPass" and use their
existing Neopets account, instead of creating a new DTI username and existing Neopets account**, instead of creating a new DTI username and
password. Existing DTI users can also link accounts if they want, too! password. Existing DTI users can also link accounts if they want, too!
We're also cognizant that a _lot_ of the pain points in using DTI right now We're also keeping in mind that a _lot_ of the pain points in using DTI right
have to do with transferring stuff between Neopets and DTI. It's possible now have to do with transferring stuff between Neopets and DTI. It's possible
that this could set us up for other smoother experiences in the future, too! that this could set us up for other smoother experiences in the future, too!
## Links to NC Mall ## Links to NC Mall
We're also planning to add a few links from DTI to the NC Mall, which we'll We're also planning to add **a few links from DTI to the NC Mall**, which
do our best to make thoughtful and unobtrusive. There's two main reasons for we'll do our best to make thoughtful and unobtrusive. There's two main
this! reasons for this!
First off, when Neopets sends users our way, we don't want them to get First off, when Neopets sends users our way, we don't want them to get
confused and stuck here. Existing DTI users know their way around NC, but new confused and stuck here. Existing DTI users know their way around NC, but new
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designs onto Neopets.com. designs onto Neopets.com.
The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the The second reason is: we believe Dress to Impress is a critical part of the
Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include a Neopets economy, and we want TNT to be able to see that, too. We'll include
lil code in the link so TNT can know people came from DTI, and can evaluate **a lil code in the link** so TNT can know which shoppers came from DTI, and
accordingly. (We expect this to be important long-term!) can evaluate accordingly. (We expect this to be important for us long-term!)
## Why now? ## Why now?
Dress to Impress has always been a very small-staff volunteer project, and Dress to Impress has always been a **very small-staff volunteer project**, and
it's been clear to everyone over the past few years that we're struggling to it's been clear to everyone over the past few years that we're struggling to
balance DTI with the rest of our lives 😖 Work and life and family have their balance DTI with the rest of our lives 😖 Work and life and family have their
own needs, and they've been increasing! own needs, and they've been increasing!
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And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right And so… there are reasons we're being careful talking about details right
now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only now, but the gist is: we're hoping that partnering with TNT will not only
help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be help improve the disjointed customization user experience, but can also be
part of a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term. I hope we part of **a more sustainable future for Dress to Impress long-term**. I hope
can tell you more about it soon! we can tell you more about it soon!
I know full well, and I'm sure you all do too, that partnerships between I know full well, and I'm sure you do too, that partnerships between
companies and their fan projects can be complicated. Sometimes it goes very companies and their fan projects can be complicated. I promise I'm doing my
well, and sometimes it goes very poorly. I promise I'm doing my best to best to represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the
represent you all, focusing on securing what's right for the community, and community, and keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll keep DTI
keeping in mind the importance of autonomy! We'll only do things we believe independent, only do things we believe genuinely serve everyone, and keep a
genuinely serve everyone, and we'll keep a critical eye as we go. critical eye as we go.
So, yeah! Here we go! We'll be working on this in the coming months, and I'll So, yeah! It's NeoPass time! We'll be working on this in the coming months,
let you know more along the way. If you have questions, please email me at and I'll let you know more along the way. If you have questions or thoughts,
<matchu@openneo.net>, and I'll do my best to help! please email me at <matchu@openneo.net>, and I'll do my best to listen and
help!
Thanks as always, everyone. We'll talk more soon! 💖 Thanks as always, everyone. We'll talk more soon! 💖
_—Matchu_ _—Matchu_