diff --git a/_posts/2024-09-11-state-of-dti-2024.md b/_posts/2024-09-11-state-of-dti-2024.md
index 8065fcf..0d5504e 100644
--- a/_posts/2024-09-11-state-of-dti-2024.md
+++ b/_posts/2024-09-11-state-of-dti-2024.md
@@ -146,10 +146,10 @@ useful for Neopians, not Worrisome, and ultimately building toward DTI's own
 independent goals, too.** I'm glad we're not in the same stagnant place we were
 earlier this year, and I hope we can keep moving forward!
 
-_(By the way, TNT and I agreed not to talk too much about the details of, like,
-what we signed and stuff… but I hope this gives you enough to understand the
-needs and values we're bringing to it! I promise I'm giving the community my
-very best, always 💜)_
+_(By the way, TNT and I decided not to talk too much about the details of, like,
+what we signed and stuff… I would normally say more, y'know? But I hope this
+gives you enough to understand the needs and values we're bringing to it! I
+promise I'm giving the community the best I know how to give, always 💜)_
 
 ### As always, thank you!