Copy edits for Dyeworks in Item Getting Guide

I think the parens are silly now that this paragraph is just kinda all
bonus clarification info anyway. And I wanted to explain the cost
computation for the potions, and highlight the bundle thing!
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Emi Matchu 2024-06-20 14:40:09 -07:00
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If you don't get the color you want, you can use another potion to try If you don't get the color you want, you can use another potion to try
again. It's also common for users to exchange the variants they don't want again. It's also common for users to exchange the variants they don't want
via "NC Trading". (Potions can be bought individually, or in bundles of 5 via "NC Trading". Potions can be bought individually, or in bundles of 5
or 10.) or 10.
[dyeworks]: https://www.neopets.com/mall/dyeworks/ [dyeworks]: https://www.neopets.com/mall/dyeworks/
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title: "At least #{pluralize @items_needed[:dyeworks].size, 'potion'}, " + title: "At least #{pluralize @items_needed[:dyeworks].size, 'potion'}, " +
"average " + "average " +
"#{dyeworks_average_num_potions_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]}, " + "#{dyeworks_average_num_potions_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]}, " +
"could be more" "could be more. 125 NC per potion, but cheaper in bundles."
} }
?? potions ?? potions
(~#{dyeworks_estimated_potions_cost_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]} NC) (~#{dyeworks_estimated_potions_cost_for @items_needed[:dyeworks]} NC)